My Own Story's cliff hanger

(continuously sad ending)

Min Su listens to all people's complaints. All the people abuse Min Su when they see him. He can't endure, so Min Su plans to escape from prison. That night Min Su attacks soldiers and uses his martial arts. People entreat to Min Su. Min Su doesn't want people to come out, but Ali entreats to him, so Min Su opens doors of all the prison. Min Su and the people defeat the soldiers together. They can come out, but in last spaceship's door there is a boss of the spaceship and many soldiers defend the door. Min Su barely wins in the fight and they come back to the earth. 

My Own Story's sad ending

They come back to earth. Suddenly, spaceships are coming to Min Su' s spaceship. These spaceships are police spaceships. Min Su and all people (who ride spaceship) are arrested. Min Su appeals to the police, but they don't listen. Because the military gave money to have Min Su and the crew of the spaceship arrested. So, all the people (who are in the spaceship) and Min Su have to go prison. And Min Su has to listen to all the people's complaints. 

My Own Story

In the years 2101, Earth becomes very dirty and global warming is very serious, so some people go to space to find new planets where people can live. Min Su is one of the participants. 

He always writes letters to his friend Tim.  

On the first day, Min Su guides the spaceship's structure, his room and spaceship's sailors. Min Su is very excited. He looks around the spaceship alone. He sees a girl and falls in love with her at first sight. He wants to be on intimate terms, so he approaches first to speak to the girl. The girl's name is Ali. She had been on the spaceship before Min Su. 

Min Su writes a letter about Ali, the spaceship and the lifestyle at night. Then he sends a letter to Tim on Earth.

On the second day, Min Su takes the sailors on at tour of the spaceship's structure, his room and the spaceship's command deck. Min Su doesn't think today's schedule is the same as yesterday's. Everyone (who rides in the spaceship) doesn't know it. He saw Ali again, but he doesn't know it. Ali says to him. "You saw me yesterday!" Min Su says "I don't know who you are. Today is my first day in this spaceship." Ali realizes he is deceived on this spaceship. She knows the truth! So she says to him, "Take this letter and hide this letter where only you know." At night, he writes a letter and sends it to Tim.
Third day, Min Su is embarrassed. He realizes today isn't the first day in the spaceship. He asks Ali and she explains to Min Su. He is very surprised as well as the sailors as they are deceived as well with the disappearing memory machine. Ali explains that someone knows the truth. 
On earth, Tim gets a letter and he is surprised. because all the letter's dates are the same. He wants to know truth. so he applies to go to find at new planet where people can live.
On the spaceship, Min Su secretly informs truth to the people. All the people know the truth and they want to come back to earth. so they plan to come back to earth. 

Movie Review(Wizard of Oz)

I saw the movie the 'Wizard of OZ' on Sunday night.
This movie's genre was classic fantasy.
This movie's characters were Toto, Dorothy, Scarecrow, Cowardly Lion,The Tin Woodsman (Tin man),the good witch, the bad witch and the Wizard of OZ.
Everyone know this movie's story. This movie is about Dorothy's adventure. Dorothy ran away from her home, but tornado was coming. so Dorothy, Toto and house was absorbed into at tornado and they fell down somewhere. And a witch was crushed to death. Then Dorothy's shoes were changed to red shoes and the bad witch tried to take off the shoes, but it was impossible. So Dorothy wanted to take off the shoes and wanted to go home. Then she went on adventure to go to the wizard of OZ's castle.
This movie took place in Dorothy' town and Dorothy's house. Dorothy fell down somewhere and the adventure to go to the Wizard of OZ's castle began.

I think this movie was a bad movie.The actors' acting wasn't very good, because the acting wasn't very convincing. Also all children know this movie's story.

My Goals

Hi, I am Sydney.
In 2013, I have three goals. I want to achieve my three goals.
First, I want to get good grade in next semester. Last semester's test's result were good, but I wasn't satisfied.
I have two ways to get good grades. I can concentrate in class and listen carefully to what the teacher is saying.Then I will study hard at home,too.
Second, I will read 50 books about science. There are two ways. While I live in GLPS camp, I will read books about science in the library. When I go to my home, I will read all books about science.  
Third, During my time in GLPS camp I will try to never get E.O.P(English Only Policy) paper. There are two ways to never get E.O.P paper. I always try to use only English. I study English words that I don't know in first self study period.
These are all my three goals. I want to achieve all my goals. Especially I want to achieve the second goal because that is close to my future job. But I hope to achieve all these goals.

Self Introdution

Hi , My name is Ji Yeon Lee. My English name is Sydney. I live in Bucheon, South Korea. I made first blog, so that is possibility to have problem.
Then I introduce myself. I am in the sixth grade, elementary.
My favorite subject is science, because I like experiment and I want to be scientist. My hobby is exercising, so I always play soccer after class and I play basketball every Saturday.
My family made of father, mother, older sister and me. Older sister and I have wide different of age. so my parents love me. My favorite color is sky blue yellow and yellow green.